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Submitted: November 5, 2005
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girl with crow :P

fullview please :D

please give me some critical comments on how to improve this,
thanks alot my friends:D

Edit:

Made the skin tone a little warmer so that she wouldn't appear so yellowy, thanks to daviella for pointing it out :)
-11/Jan/2006
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What a cute little girl! As usual, her face is very realistically draw. A very sweet face too, I might add.
The shape of her neck and her shoulders remind me very much of Audrey Hepburn. With the square neckline of the dress, it can almost pass for Natasha in "War and Peace".

The crow is very sweet as well.

The only thing I feel is a bit odd is the long and dark fingernails.... Maybe it's just me, but somehow I don't think those nails go that well with wuch a sweet girl. (My very persional opinion is that long black fingernails belongs to witches)
tout de suite dans mes :+fav: :clap:

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This is a very nice effort overall. The face is particularly nice, soft but detailed and expressive. If I had to nitpick, my suggestions would be to make the neck a little thicker and shorter, the hand a little smaller and do less of the dark shading on the skin next to the fabric.The shading on the dress is nice and soft and the lace is a nice touch.

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Very nice, anatomy is a lil weird looking, but great job overall.
Stunning work! I kind of like the elongated neck. I agree, the nails are a little out-of-place.
WOW! I've watched you grow so much as an artist as far as colouring and shading in concern over the past few months...what a large move forward! Excellent work!

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thanks alot :D
well I really have to thank you all for giving me so many helpful comments,
I couldnt have improved as much if not for you guys :)

thanks again for helping my friend, really appreciate it :D
thanks alot :)
well I was going to make her gothic&lolita,
but maybe she turn out to be more "lolita" then "goth" ^^"
thanks again for the comment and encouragement :D
thanks alot for your encouragement and fav :)
I think your right, the hand is too big in proportion to her face,
also the neck is too long, more like anime proportion (wasn't in purpose) :P
I'll try to be more conscious about proportion next time :)

thanks alot for the suggestions and compliments :)
and thanks for the fav+!
also nice to meet you new friend :D

appreciate it alot :D

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